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Post by hulksmash9 on Jun 15, 2010 4:49:16 GMT -5
Thanks for the welcome, you should check my drawings in the " your own drawings section "
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Post by wolverinefan on Jun 15, 2010 15:41:02 GMT -5
Just saw them and they are Incredible (pardon the pun).
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Post by lyrix1985 on Jun 17, 2010 11:53:14 GMT -5
Pheonix - unlimited power Lobo - known throughout the universe for his strength and fighting skill, nearly impossible to kill Thor - my favorite and he's a god Batman - money, gadjets, smart and always finds a way to win Onslaught - incase Pheonix desides to become jean grey again (lol) Green Lantern - can make anything his mind can think up
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Post by marvelisepic on Jun 17, 2010 18:47:15 GMT -5
alright alright alright HERE WE GO:
red skull has come back once again and is now terrorizing new york city with a large army of robots that nobody knows HOW he got his hands on. Anyways, my team goes in to check it out. immediately, cap starts barking out commands. "Flash! get these people out of here! Storm! whip up a tornado to give us a good head start against this invasion!" And so Flash starts blazing everywhere, evacuating everyone in sight. Meanwhile, Storm creates a tornado and unleashes it when flash is done his job. The vortex whipes out waves upon waves of robots. it doesnt wipe ALL of them out, but still does a pretty good job.Then, captain immediately looks at the martian. "Hey Jonn. can you pinpoint Red Skulls location?" The martian takes his hands to his head and starts telepathically looking for the red skull. then he comes back. "I cant pinpoint exactly where he is. he must be using some sort of telepathic cloaking device. but he is in that ship just above manhatten." they all look up and see the large aircraft hovering over the buildings. then immediately captain smerks. "all right" he begins. "martian, you stay here with flash and storm to wipe out these armies of robots. batman and thing, your with me. Martain, if we ever need back up, we'll keep in contact telepathically. once your done here, bring the heat along with flash and storm".
After the breifing, batman calls his bat-wing. the batshaped plane appears almost immediately, and batman hops in along with cap and thing. They launch up into an open vault that takes them into the ship.when they hope out, thing says "alrighty! lets give the red skull a rock-hard head massage!" but batman stops him. "wait" he says. "why would red skull just let us in here like some open invitation?" then cap says "only reason for that was if this was a .. .... . .LOOK OUT!" suddenly sleeping gas comes out and covers the entire room. Cap and Thing wipe out, but Batman, being his usual prepared self, takes a gask mask immediately from his belt and puts it on his face. there was no time left to escape however, as an army of robots rushed into the room. batman couldnt even dent the robots hard, vibranium shells so he is immediately defeated. all of the unconcious trio are then tooken out of the room.
When they all awoke, they all found themselves bound to a single wall with metal bars. thing tries breaking out, but even with his super strentgh he just cant budge. then he hears a voice "dont bother trying to get out. the bars are made of vibranium". then they all see the red skull coming into the room with his grim smerk. " None of you could ever get out. ive removed captain americas sheild. Also batmans utility belt. it wasnt easy though, had to get rubber tongs. and dont try using your minds. sheilds are over your heads to keep the martian from locating you." then he walks straight up to Cap of all people, for of all the members of my team, captain america is his worsed enemy. "why are you doing this red skull? why have you randomly launched an attack on new york?" then red skull loses his grin. "consider it to be my sweet revenge captain! youve destroyed my home back in world war 2, so i will destroy your home now!" then batman asks "but how did you get all of this vibranium?" then red skull turns to him with his grin returning. "by the skin of my teeth", he answered. "it wasnt easy taking all of the vibranium away from wakanda, home of a friend of yours, the black panther. but i have wasted enough breath explaining to you fools! as soon as i kill you, you wont even live to tell the tale!" But then as red skull finishes his sentence, he hears strange noises coming from the other room. it was almost like thunder. . . .
Then, from a blink of an eye, a red blur comes out of nowhere and strikes the red skull to the ground. Finally, red skull gets up and shouts: "ALL UNITS! AHNILLATE THESE INTRUDERS IMMEDIATELY!" then storm and the martian come out ready for action. Storm unleashes a somewhat small whirlwind to take out all of the robots. then, while flash puts red skulls hands behind his back, the martian frees Batman, cap and thing all from the vibranium bars.
"but. . . . . how???" red skull starts. "How did you come ready to fight when batman, captain america and things minds were all cloaked???" "easy", batman responded. "before your robots came in to take me out unconscious, i contacted the martian telepathically at the last second. that was more than enough time for him to come in and deal with you". Then batman put hand cuffs and red skull and took him into the batwing. "but whatre we gonna do wit' all dese vibranium goons?" thing asked. "drive back to wakanda and give it back" said cap.
and so, red skull was defeated and the vibranium was back in its right ful place. THE END
(not a very detailed story, but i thought it was pretty good)
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Post by wolverinefan on Jun 17, 2010 20:52:03 GMT -5
CLAP CLAP CLAP!!! I thought it was an excellent story marvelisepic. Also lyrix1985 I liked your team as well.
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Post by marvelisepic on Jun 18, 2010 19:34:06 GMT -5
wow you know wolverinefan i think we could get along very well. but to me, one criticism to my story is that cap and thing pretty muich didnt do anything to help. well actually, captain had an excellent strategy but thing realy didnt do anything
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Post by marvelisepic on Jun 18, 2010 19:56:57 GMT -5
Okay super villian team: Red Skull (leader. fighting skills equal to captain america. BTW not very creative with cap villians LOL)
Solomon Grundy (Match for thing)
Gorilla Graud (telepath like martian manhunter and villian of flash)
Green Goblin (smart and tactical with gadgets, like batman)
Giganta (large size may be weather resistant. essential choice for facing storm)
Mysterio (illusions and gadgets good to confuse flash)
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Post by marvelisepic on Jun 18, 2010 21:26:00 GMT -5
Fight scene (warning: theres really no story as to why this fight is happening LOL)
My villian team is wreaking havok in gotham city. batman knowing we couldnt handle these brutes alone, called for the rest of my team to help. He arrives at the scene in his batmobile with captain america, flash runs there, storm flies there and the martian also flies there, carrying the thing as he goes. just as they are theyre, grundy decides to take some joy in crushing an innocent woman. lukily, flash saves her at the very last second. "HEY!" grundy shouts."where did woman go??" Then,as grundy is confused, the martian drops the thing and the thing does a piledriver on grundy, creating a crater in the ground. Meanwhile, the goblin flies around batman as he gets out of his batmobile with cap joining him. as the goblin circles them on his glider, he throws razor bats rapidly at them both. cap blocks them all with his sheild, while batman uses his agility to dodge them all. then, batman shoots his grappling hook on the goblins glider and takes off as goblin flies away. Knowing that batman could easily beat goblin, cap goes the opposite direction to help the others.
while batman still holds on to his grappling hook, the goblin just cuts the wire on his end, laughing manianically while he does it. the grappling hook breaks off, and has batman falls to the ground, he throws a batarang at one of the gliders rockets, blowing it out and causing goblin to topple off of it. Goblin has a hard fall, but batman uses his cape to glide down to the ground safely landing on his feet. But soon, goblin stands back up and gets into a hand-to-hand combat position. then, batman puts out his hand and waves his fingers to himself, as if saying "bring it on" with his hands.
Meanwhile, flash looks for more citizens to evacuate but surprisingly finds noone there. as he is distracted, mysterio punches him in the back of the head, knocking flash over. but in the blink of an eye flash gets back up and starts rapid punching mysterio in the chest. but then he realizes that this is not mysterio, but a robot clone of him. then he looks up, seeing a dragon flying down at him as if about to attack (little does he know its only an illusion). He freaks out and starts running in circles, with the illusion dragon following him.
We join Thing trading multiple blows with grundy. they both are having no luck with eachother, as they are both nearly indestructable. thing calls out to the martian, "hey jonn! i could use a lil' help ova here!" Jonn hears and starts on his way. then suddenly he is mind wiped and falls to the ground, creating another, smaller crater. he stands back up a little dazed, and sees gorilla graud standing above him. the gorilla mindwipes him again, this time longer and more powerfully. it then becomes all too much for the martian and he topples over, becoming unconscious. (villians 1-0)
Hovering above the scene, storm sees that jonn is unconscious. he flies in and picks the martian up over her shoulder. then she sees just above her giganta towering over everyone. giganta tries stomping on storm, but she quickly flies out of the way, carrying the martian as she goes. gigants tries several attempts to squash storm with her fists, but storm keeps dodging while peppering giganta with electric shocks in one hand, and carrying the martian in the other. then she safely places the martian on top of a building, and then flies back to giganta to continue with the shocks. But soon storm is slapped to the ground by giganta's enormous hands. she manages to recover just above the ground in midair but sees giganta preparing to stomp her. But then the martian fully recovers and flies up to giganta, knocking her out in a single punch. giganta falls over and crushes an entire building below her. (Heroes -1 villians-0 (because the martian recovered)).
Storm looks at the martian and says thank you. but then she topples over. she is being mindwiped by gorilla graud. The martian notices and says "oh no you dont!" and mindwipes gorilla graud. the gorilla, with a mind not as telepathically developed as the martians, topples over and storm gets back on her feet. "thats another one i owe you" she says. (heroes 2-0)
"Hey Jonn! Anytime yer ready!" thing says as he launches multiple blows on solomon grundy, who is almost defeated. Jonn is ready to help, but then the thing wipes out grundy at the last minute. "nev'r mind" he says smerking. "ive got it". (heroes 3-0)
We join batman and the goblin duking it out once again. This battle has been going on for quite a while. They hearl blows after blows at eachother, but almost everytime they both keep avoiding. soon, batman gets tired. The goblin starts laughing manianically. "Give it up batman!" he says. "your not superpowered like i am! like most ordinary people, you get tired after a short period. but thanks to my own super serum, it has givin me powers. I could go on all night!why dont you call it quits while you still draw breath??" but then at the end of that sentence, batman pulls a tazor from his belt and shocks the goblin. Even through the goblins rubber suit, the shock drives him unconscious. batman gets up. "you forget, goblin" batman says, "ive faced superpowered beings before . . . . . . and won". (heroes 4-0)
Meanwhile, Flash is STILL running from the dragon. finally he grows tired of just doing the same thing over and over so he ducks and the dragon misses him completly. the dragon crashes, turning into gas and spreading across the city. it was at that point that flash realizes it was an illusion. he sees several mysterio robots coming in on him. he charges at them, fighting them all at a time. unforunetly, because he is outnumbered, he cant concentrate as easily. Finally, flash gets frustrated and spins around rapidly, creating a tornado and spinning all the robots around. they all eventually fall to the ground. during there fall, theyre was one robot that seemed to be screaming. flash catches him and punched the glass open, seeing a face in the glass. he smerks. "so YOURE the real one!" he said. "you have no idea how long ive been looking for you!" then he knocks mysterio unconscious. (heroes 5-0)
then everyone stops. ALMOST everyone had been defeated. except for one. . . . . then all of the sudden a HUMONGOUS ship comes out of nowhere and blasts all of the heroes. they all fall over unconscious, even the thing with his super hard skin. only captain america remained. (villians 5-5)
out of the ship came the red skull. "so YOURE the one behind this madness!" captain america shouted. "indeed" the skull replied, "but i left you standing. dont worry, your friends arent dead. . . . not yet. they are just paralyzed. for you see captain, i want no interference between this fight between YOU and ME!" and so the red skull got into fighting position. feeling determined, captain america through away his sheild and got into his fighting position. they both charge at eachother.
they both collide with great impact. the captain swung his leg to the red skulls head, but the skull ducked and tripped the captains other leg. the red skull still held on however, so the captain took that opportunity to flip the skull over by bending his leg to the side. the captain got up quickly and started throwing blow after blow at the red skulls face. soon the red skull gripped caps face with tension and force and threw the captain to the side.the red skull quickly got up, while captain did the same. the skull through blow after blow at the captain but he managed to avoid every one. then the captain did a 360 spin while nailing red skull in the face, making him temporarely dazed. then the captain broke the red skulls arm and kicked in brutally in the face. the skull fell over and cap broke his other arm. knowing that the red skull had had enough, the captain did a finishing blow at the red skulls face, knocking him unconscious. (heroes WIN 6-5)
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Post by wolverinefan on Jun 27, 2010 2:02:52 GMT -5
That was AMAZING!!! Great job on the story. I hope you keep writing I enjoy them tremendously.
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Post by marvelisepic on Jun 28, 2010 18:12:26 GMT -5
wow thank you. also, when is that other story gonna continue? you know the one with silver surfer being mind controlled
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Post by steve on Jul 18, 2010 13:19:44 GMT -5
heroes professor x silent leader and financial backer...telepathy iron man tech support,finacial backer silver surfer power cosmic dr. strange magic gladiator heavy hitter sentry heavy hitter multiple man between silver surfers power cosmic and stranges magic they could really boost multiple man strength and toughness.another words in a pinch you could make an army of soldiers in a minute that have strength comparable to thor{power cosmic can do this}and can take a hit like hulk{stranges magic can do this}
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Post by wolverinefan on Jul 21, 2010 13:40:11 GMT -5
Very intersting Steve. I like your team. Welcome aboard btw and sorry I haven't been around in a while. I will try to finish my story soon.
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Post by lyrix1985 on Oct 31, 2010 12:10:55 GMT -5
Ty wolverine fan, I'm really liking the teams that have been put together, I see that a lot of thought went into them.
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Post by wolverinefan on Nov 5, 2010 6:09:26 GMT -5
I try to my friend. I have been rather busy lately but have been making the rounds back here again. I certainly missed it.
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Post by hawkarrow11 on Jan 10, 2012 20:18:22 GMT -5
my hero team would be Leader - Captain America Superman Wolverine Green Lantern Silver Surfer Iron Man Thor
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